Should You Gamble on Your College Application Essay?
This time of year, a flurry of stories hit the national media about students who get into all the Ivy League schools (plus Stanford).
The stories always include scrutiny and speculation about their college application essays.
I have to admit that I’m sort of a sucker for these articles.
There’s such unpredictability with who gets into what schools.
Everyone is looking for clues as to what works and what doesn’t especially with the essays.
Can you blame them?
Often, the risk-takers seemed to prevail.
Over the last month we’ve had Ziad and his #BlackLifeMatters essay; the Quadruplet’s package deal; and first-gen Cassandra Hsiao’s piece on her broken English.
Does this mean you should take a risk with your essay?
The reality is what works for others most likely won’t do the job.
In fact, it could backfire.
Just how do you know?
(For the record, I don’t believe the ivies are the end-all in getting a stellar education. But if you are obsessed, read on…)
Ziad and the Quadruplets Took A creative risk with Their Essays And Won!
I loved the article about the quadruplets who teamed up on their applications and essays and got into Yale and Harvard as a package deal.
This was clearly a calculated risk that paid off big time.
‘In a clever stroke, the four brothers wrote essays that can be read separately, yet are meant to be read together, like four pieces of a puzzle. Each piece is charming and winning on its own, but together, they are even better, and college admissions officers everywhere seemed to agree and were unwilling to pull them apart.’ From the New York Times article.
This showed me that colleges and schools can be open-minded to creative admissions approaches, but only if there already are solid reasons they want those students.
Just this week, A american-muslim teen who fights for social justice named Ziad Ahmed made headlines after getting accepted to Stanford University using a college application essay that included only the same hashtag phrase #BlackLivesMatter a hundred times.
A controversial essay about a controversial subject.
And he got in.
What does that say about these essays?
What does it say about crazy-competitive colleges, such as Stanford?
Some college admissions industry pundits were handwringing, saying this out-of-the-box essay proved the essays don’t matter.
I say hog wash.
To me, it demonstrates that taking a risk can pay off with these essays, mainly because countless of them say the same thing in the same way, and college admissions officers can’t help jumping at otherwise exemplary students who find a unique way to convey themselves.
Should you take such a risk?
Should you write an essay and only include one phrase 100 times?
Heck no!
It worked for Ziad because he is the one and only Ziad, and this one and only essay perfectly reflected something unique and fundamental about him.thesis statement to kill a mockingbird racism
You aren’t Ziad, so it won’t do the job.
And keep in mind that his essay also somehow perfectly complemented everything else he showed Stanford about himself in his application, and I’m guessing that was a pretty impressive package.
If you decide to take a risk with your essay, it must be consistent with who you are and accurately reflect your individuality and also be consistent with your entire application.
Your Risk Should Reflect You
Copying the risk someone else took will not work.
Other risk-takers can inspire and give you ideas, yes.
But what you decide to write in your essays must come from your authentic self.
If they don’t, they could hurt you. That’s the last thing you want.
Remember, colleges use these essays to round out their picture of you from your complete applications.
If you are a more conservative, head-down, follow-the-rules kind of student, perhaps your essay should reflect that style with regards to your topic. And be more old-fashioned.
If you are bold and idealistic, and have a whacky side, it might make sense to do something out there, like Ziad’s topic.
(Personally, I think Ziad’s piece was more of a stunt than an essay. The risk, I believe, should be more in your topic and what you have to say about it. Avoid gimmicks!)
Within the last decade, I’ve seen all types of topics help get students accepted.
There was clearly the boy who wrote about stealing a baby goat.
And getting caught by the cops.
He even ended it saying he would do it all over again. What? (He included larger life lessons, so his
irreverent ending worked.)
He got into NYU.
I’ve seen students write essays on topics which can be often red-flagged as cliche or overdone including the death of a parent or a sports injury or a mission trip land their dream schools.
I believe if the topic is true to what that student wants to showcase, and enhances their admissions self-portrait, almost anything goes.
Some students have faced horrendous hardship in their lives, which has helped define who they are.
Often, it’s a wise idea for them to write about those personal challenges.
Others, however, have yet to face many intense personal crises or challenges.
I advise these students to brainstorm more everyday topics. (One student just told me she got into all her target schools, including Harvard and Stanford, and her topic was tying her shoes.)
In yesteryear, I had to function hard to convince students and parents that writing about ‘mundane’ topics was NOT taking a risk.
I believe recent feedback indicating that these types of essays are effective has confirmed their power.
For example, last ‘season’s’ college application essay poster child, Brittany Stinson, who got into all the ivies, wrote her essay about her love for Costco. (And she even credited this blog for inspiring her to feature such an everyday topic! Read my Q&A on How Brittany Stinson Wrote Her Costco Essay.)
This season, another brilliant student, Cassandra Hsiao from here in Orange County, California, got into all the ivies with her essay on an ‘everyday’ topic her struggle learning English.
I also believe that getting in to a bundle of top colleges, even all the ivies, does not necessarily prove the student’s essay was exemplary.
Many times school decided they wanted a student based on other qualifications and attributes, and the essay played no role.
You never know.
I probably was in the minority, but I thought the essay written by Kwasi Enin, another brilliant and talented student who got into all the ivies in 2015, wasn’t that hot. In fact, I thought it was on the dull side.
As it is possible to see, it’s almost impossible to figure out how much the essay mattered in every one of these celebrity acceptances.
The only certainty is that these essays failed to nix their chance of acceptance. Beyond that, we have been all only hypothesizing.
For some, the essay can tip the scale in a student’s favor. For others, it might not have mattered at all.
All you certainly can do is write your best essay, really.
Should YOU Take a Risk with Your Essay?
If you are considering taking a risk with your essay topic, however, think hard about why you are doing that.
What do you have to gain?
What do you have to lose?
If you are going to a super competitive college, and know you have outstanding stats, maybe it makes sense to step out of the box a bit in an effort to help make an impression.
Remember, every one of the students who got into multiple ivies had off-the-charts stats, such as near perfect test scores and grades.
Do your due diligence and research your target schools so that you have some idea of what type of student they are looking for, and try to line up the tone and topic that best shows why you are really a fit.
If you don’t want to mess around gaming the whole process, stick to finding a topic that highlights what makes you tick, and trust that will help you best land where you belong.
I like that approach the most effective, frankly, no matter what college or university you wish to attend.
THIS PAGE has my best posts to learn just how you will find your own unique topic and ace your essay, risk or no risk.
I will be offering three, two-part essay workshops this summer in my hometown of Laguna Beach on how to write awesome college application essays.
The workshops, which will be 90 minutes each on Saturday morning and Sunday afternoon, will be held at our coastal town’s wonderful community center, on Third Street, called the Suzi Q, located in the heart of our downtown.
The boot camps will include everything from understanding what makes an effective essay to how to brainstorm unique topics to editing and polishing drafts.
The essay workshops will teach students how to craft personal statement essays that will be perfect for the Common Application and other core essays, as well as writing admissions essays for the University of California and other colleges and universities.
Students will also learn tips on how to answer the most common supplemental essay prompts, such as why they are a ‘fit’ with regards to their target schools or writing about their extracurricular activities.
I will focus on helping students learn to identify and share their real-life experiences to spin into essays that reveal who they are, how they learn and what they value.
My goal with these essay workshops is to help students find topics and learn how to craft narrative style essays to give them more confidence in handling these stressful essays. Stories rock college application essays!
All students of my essay workshops will receive free digital copies of my popular writing guides, all available on Amazon.
Dates for the three weekend workshops (students only need attend ONE weekend workshop):
June 24 and 25July 22 and 23August 26 and 27
Days will be Saturday from 10 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. and Sunday from noon to 1:30 p.m.
Cost: $150 per weekend boot camp. These workshops are intended for collegebound high school students.
Registration for my essay workshops through the City of Laguna Beach starts May 1. To learn more and/or sign up, go here: www.lagunabeachcity.net. Click on the Recreation Department to find my workshops.